[ ]-Extra point for Phineas or Ferb.
Anna: I'm Phineas' daughter. O.O
[ ]-Extra point for crushing on Phineas or Ferb's descendant.
[ ]-Extra point if they end up in a relationship with said person
[ ]Point if they are they in extra activities. (Sports, Firesidegirls, Cheerleaders, etc.)
PtPG: Anna's slightly interested in the Fireside Girls, but she doesn't join because Dede says they're overrated. She prefers to just hang out with her friends.
[ ]-Extra point per if there's more than one.
[ ]-Extra point if they are a leader or lead in said activity. (Chief fireside girl, Head cheerleader, quarterback, etc.)
Anna: I can't lead TT.TT
[ ]-Remove points if said activity is key to their story.
[ ]Point if they are they romantically focused.
[ ]Point if they have no set focus of their own. (Phineas had inventing, Buford had bullying, etc).
Anna: I'm a inter-dimensional traveler!
[ ]Point if their love interest is a Mary-Sue or Gary-Stu. (Perfect beautiful sweet girlfriend who never fights or brooding, dark, handsome boyfriend)
Anna: I have no love interest at the moment.
PtPg: (David hides his crush XD) I don't think that David's much of a Gary Stu. He's hot-tempered and is a slightly cruel joker, and he's not super-duper hot. XD
[ ]Name 5 character flaws that would be undesirable for a real person to possess. Add a point for every one you can't name. Check this off if you can't name five.
PtPG: Pfffftt .XD
Name Flaws Here:
-Impulsive
-Sensitive
-Overly Trusting
-Insecure
-Gets scared easily
PtPG: I don't make those character notes for no reason. XD (I still think she needs more, though .)
[ ]-Extra point if they have "flaws" that are actually beneficial to them.
[ ]Point if your character has no weaknesses.
PtPG: She trusts people way too easily and is kind of a scardey cat. XD
Anna: >.<
[ ]Point if your character has no fears.
Anna: Bugs, big animals, darkness, and *gulps* death .*shudders*
[/]Point if your character has the same name (or nickname)/ looks similar to/takes various attributes and traits from its creators.
PtPg: She's named after a friend of mine from middle school, but she does share my trait of optimism and insecurity, plus my love for singing, so .half point. =3
Total points: ½
[ ]-Extra point if your insert is considered very popular or cool.
PtPG: No.
Anna: But I want to be
[x]Point if your character is very very happy and positive.
PtPG: Phinbella kids aren't allowed to be emo. XD
Anna: XD But there's too many "very"'s in that sentence.
Total points: 1 ½
[ ]-Extra point if they act sad and depressed at random times for no reason.
[ ]Point if they are a girl who is very girly or a male who is very masculine.
Anna: Fashion and boys, yaaaaay!!! XD
PtPG: Wut.
Anna: Just kidding! XD
[x]Point if they get very good grades.
PtPG: Anna is fairly smart I'd say A- to B range.
Total points: 2 ½
[ ]Point if they have no clear role in the P&F world.
PtPG: She's an inter-dimensional traveling Phinbella daughter. |3
[ ]Point if they are the only character in the spotlight.
Dede: The above sentence is an insult to me. >.>
[ ]-Extra point if the only other character in the spotlight is their romantic interest.
[ ]-Extra point if the only time other characters get spotlight, they are talking about said sue or his/her romantic life.
[x]Point if they are the obvious "leader" of the group an all characters are drawn to them.
PtPG: Actually, Anna is hardly a "leader." However, she is the main character in the series, all her friends/family love her, and tend to drag at least one of her friends on her adventures.
Total points: 3 ½
[ ]Point if they are highly persuasive.
[ ]Point if their skills play little importance to the story. (i.e. "Phineas Jr." can invent, but rarely does)
Anna: Dimension traveling for the win. XD
[x]Point if they are a good singer.
Anna: So I'm told .
PtPG:
Total points: 4 ½
[ ]-Remove point if singing is important to the story.
[ ]Point if they have very good fashion sense.
PtPG: Her clothes seem relatively plain to me.
[ ]Point if you find your own character attractive.
PtPG: I'm straight.
[x]Point if they look exceptionally like both their parents.
PtPG: Yep. Isabella's head shape and hair color, Phin's eyes/nose. (Nose was the best decision I ever made. XD)
Total points: 5 ½
[ ]Point if "forbidden love" is ever used in their relationship.
Dede: I forbid it! David is so annoying and I don't want my best friend to end up with him! >.>
PtPG: Shut up, Dede.
[/]Point if their relationship with a character drastically changes either character's attitude or personality.
PtPG: Not quite sure how to answer this one. Anna's happy around everyone, but she acts more emotional around Dede and her parents because she opens up and talks about her feelings more
Total points: 6
EXTRA: (Do not add points)
Other hints your character may be sue:
[ ]There's more than one club for their character series
[ ]There is a club for one of the pairings.
[ ]The artist can't handle criticism.
[ ]Artist gets upset over shippings that involve a main character with another character that isn't their OC.
PtPG: Again, don't know how to answer. Anna's not popular enough for that. XD
Point Total out of 38: 6
Scale: Balance Character
0= Anti-Sue
1-11 = Balance Character
12+ = Mary-Sue
PtPG: 6, huh? That's not so bad. I still think I should put in some more character flaws and stuff, but I'm proud.











6 points! Wow. 3rd lowest score that I've ever seen. Go, Anna!
The only problem is that they're kinda time-consuming, especially when you're formatting all your little comments.
Thanks!
NOW I'm thinking to do this with my OCs...